Goal: To include where the character was and what was happening.
Alex was so exited she was invited to the art gallery with her friends. She had never been invited anywhere, and Alex definetly had an eye for art. She was so creative, she would make houses out of tooth picks, farms made with twigs and, she LOVED to paint. So when she was invited to the art gallery, she was so exited!
The doorbell rang, Alex sprinted to the door with happiness. Once they arrived at the art gallery Alex noticed a piece of art that intrigued her. It was a pair of hands holding a hamburger, and it definetly made her feel hungry.