100 Word Challenge (…When all of a sudden…)

It was exactly 2:00 AM when I heard a loud crash down the road. I got out of bed to see what it was, no-one else in the house was awake. I put on my furry slippers and silk dressing gown and gripped the gold, rusty door handle. I bit my bottom lip hoping the creaky door wouldn’t wake up my parents.

As I got closer to the end of the road where the old house that was making the loud crashing noises I heard another loud CRASH even louder then before. I walked up to the old abandoned house and whispered through the key whole “Is anyone there?”, no-one replied but a couple seconds later WHEN ALL OF A SUDDEN I felt a hand grab my arm…

2 thoughts on “100 Word Challenge (…When all of a sudden…)

  1. Hi Grace!
    I really liked how you made it a cliffhanger and I also liked how you made the reader picture what was happening
    Great Job!!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

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