100 Word Challenge …But then the flash made me…

BUT THEN THE FLASH MADE ME jump back, it was like it was a warning sign to step away, I called my parents to tell them what had happened but they didn’t pick up so I left them a voice mail.

Hi, my name is Jess and I think I have just been electrocuted and my parents are out of the house right now so I don’t know what to do. My parents won’t pick up their phones but they always tell me that if someone doesn’t pick up their phone it doesn’t mean their in trouble but this time I had a feeling they were…

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  1. I love the way you have structured this work Grace. Starting the piece with action and then flicking back to set the scene was a really clever idea that works well here. Great writing.

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